Is the scent
of an ancestor’s skull kicked
down a bush runway –
an elephant remembers
bones and dust,
the echo of hyena
comedy nights, jaws
on buffalo bones
chalk and dust,
a tall silhouette beyond the runway –
a blind man – inhales the dusk
for ghost-lions
before crossing to light
the camp fire
blood and dust
in the dark, leopards
gaze at embers
of an ancient story
fate throws the bones,
a plane flies
into a hillside
flesh and blood,
bones and dust,
and creosote.
The poem really stirs the senses….am excellent verse IMHO.
Thanks, Charles.
Fantastic imagery, BB!
Africa has a way of branding itself on the mind, Nancy. Thanks.
I can smell this poem bb 🙂 so you have done a good job – some of my strongest memories are olfactory (not always in a good way) – really love ‘fate throws the bones’
Thanks, Gabe. Olfactory memory is a startling thing.
Wow! Your poem is powerfully evocative, bluebee.
Thanks, AD – memories, good and bad, evoked by the smell of creosote. The nervous system is an amazing thing.
I really do like this and who you have shown what creosote can smell like. Such a really pungent smell and one that is never forgotten.
Hello Renee 🙂
Yes, it always reminds me of the African bush, because the bomas and some of the wooden dwellings were often treated with it. Olfactory memory is very strong, isn’t it?
The smell of jasmine reminds me of exams! 🙂
A fascinating word craft and visual. Glad I stopped by!
Hello Don 😀